Choice project: Revision of reflection

     For my choice project I revised my Personal Narrative. I wanted to do that because I had felt my Personal Narrative had been very weak. I wanted to give myself a second chance after my first one hadn't gone so well. I think that my revisions went very well because I incorporated grammatical changes as well as structural changes. I did using feedback from my teacher and another student in a writing center. I wanted to give myself a second chance at the Personal Narrative and I think that it went very well.